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Recent Movie Reviews

7 Movie Reviews

the mouth drawings in this are immaculate

Good job maintaining the style and mass of the turtle. Lots of classic toon personality.
For such a short piece, the action feels a little drawn out. I'd suggest trying to make the moments of high action (slipping the tongue back in the mouth/ hammering the stake/ hitting the cliff) more snappy; Use fewer frames, camera shake and different frame weights to create a sense of impact. it will go a long way in the next episode!

nugolicartoon responds:

Thanks :)

Big fan of the art and animation! The pacing works and the acting is good. Not a fan of the writing.
I can get past the hamster being an asshole for no reason, but why does he suddenly get all teary eyed and want to stay in the end? Seems like it was just to set up that one bait and switch joke.
I would have liked to see a few more establishing shots. Maybe the guy bumping the cage or otherwise being a doofus before the Taken monologue, just to give the hamster a reason to be mad at him? Something in the middle to change the hamster's mind about killing him would help, like he leaves out a big bowl of food or a toy. He could even kick the hamster out the door in the end so it's clear to the audience that te hamster is indeed gone (The bait and switch makes that part confusing).

Great quality assets and people that just needs a little more substance to be a hit!

Recent Game Reviews

3 Game Reviews

So cute and so beautiful!

So much fun! Love the music and the colors. Very clear inspiration but it plays differently now that I can mash attack through everything.

I played all the way to the Playing Card Boss where you get the blue kangaroo. During the Cool Kid Quiz I pressed left on the first hamburger and found the "it's a feature" burger (cute). I pressed left again thinking maybe it would fix the issue. The "It's a feature" stayed but the burger slid away and wouldn't return. I mashed z to try to just finish the quiz and continue but I'm stuck on the "Wat is your onion on Trees?" question. I've pressed every key and now even the left and right arrows have stopped animating.

I would have liked to play the whole game :( unfortunately my CPU isn't very good and I can't imagine playing the whole first level again with all the lag I've got. Best wishes!

Cool!

Recent Art Reviews

1 Art Review

so gentle!...

Character design, art, and animation! :)
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Connor Quothe @ConnorQuothe

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Joined on 8/17/15

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