the mouth drawings in this are immaculate
the mouth drawings in this are immaculate
Good job maintaining the style and mass of the turtle. Lots of classic toon personality.
For such a short piece, the action feels a little drawn out. I'd suggest trying to make the moments of high action (slipping the tongue back in the mouth/ hammering the stake/ hitting the cliff) more snappy; Use fewer frames, camera shake and different frame weights to create a sense of impact. it will go a long way in the next episode!
Thanks :)
Fucking Incredible!! This is the first time in a while I laughed at a cartoon all the way through. Visually I love the thick lines and solid colors. The writing is cute, well paced, and meters out the satanic shit very well. It stands well apart from similar hell-themed sitcoms. Well done!
The audio was scratchy, the animation was jumpy, and the review--though I understand it was meant to be humorously short--was rude, if not completely absent. The art is decent though, and I liked the pirate's story.
I cant help but imagine this might be better if I could hear what they were saying.
Character design, art, and animation! :)
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