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ConnorQuothe

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the mouth drawings in this are immaculate

Good job maintaining the style and mass of the turtle. Lots of classic toon personality.
For such a short piece, the action feels a little drawn out. I'd suggest trying to make the moments of high action (slipping the tongue back in the mouth/ hammering the stake/ hitting the cliff) more snappy; Use fewer frames, camera shake and different frame weights to create a sense of impact. it will go a long way in the next episode!

nugolicartoon responds:

Thanks :)

Big fan of the art and animation! The pacing works and the acting is good. Not a fan of the writing.
I can get past the hamster being an asshole for no reason, but why does he suddenly get all teary eyed and want to stay in the end? Seems like it was just to set up that one bait and switch joke.
I would have liked to see a few more establishing shots. Maybe the guy bumping the cage or otherwise being a doofus before the Taken monologue, just to give the hamster a reason to be mad at him? Something in the middle to change the hamster's mind about killing him would help, like he leaves out a big bowl of food or a toy. He could even kick the hamster out the door in the end so it's clear to the audience that te hamster is indeed gone (The bait and switch makes that part confusing).

Great quality assets and people that just needs a little more substance to be a hit!

Fucking Incredible!! This is the first time in a while I laughed at a cartoon all the way through. Visually I love the thick lines and solid colors. The writing is cute, well paced, and meters out the satanic shit very well. It stands well apart from similar hell-themed sitcoms. Well done!

Not terribly original, but excellent work!

JJSwift responds:

XD Thanks man!

The audio was scratchy, the animation was jumpy, and the review--though I understand it was meant to be humorously short--was rude, if not completely absent. The art is decent though, and I liked the pirate's story.

I cant help but imagine this might be better if I could hear what they were saying.

Character design, art, and animation! :)
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